Tag Archives: haiku
Revised Winter Haiku – one more time!
Thanks for those of you that pointed out that I still have trouble counting! I like this version better anyway. Grey overcast skies Freezing wind chilling the bone Announcing winter.
Winter Haiku
Winter Freezing cold wind blows Chilling the body to the bone It must be winter. Thanks to Barefoot Blogger for the information about haiku. I really like the challenge of distilling a thought to the bare essence. This one … Continue reading
Thanksgiving Haiku – edited (again)
Last night I finally figured out what was wrong with my Thanksgiving haiku. It was supposed to have three lines, which it did. The first line was to have 5 syllables, which I thought it did because when I say … Continue reading
Thanksgiving Haiku – edited
Okay, I think I’ve got it now! See if this fits the rules of 3 lines with syllables of 5 – 7 – 5. Good food everywhere Made by loving, caring hands Feeds body and soul.
Thanksgiving haiku
Someone (sorry, I’ve forgotten who) issued a challenge for the holiday haiku of 3 lines with syllables of 5-7-3. I’m not sure this follows the rules exactly, but it sort of works. Good food everywhere Made by loving, caring hands … Continue reading
