Revised Winter Haiku – one more time!

Thanks for those of you that pointed out that I still have trouble counting!  I like this version better anyway.

Grey overcast skies

Freezing wind chilling the bone

Announcing winter. 

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5 Responses to Revised Winter Haiku – one more time!

  1. Still not right. Try again.

  2. Or review the definition of syllables for they’re so very easily sounded out.

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